This is the developed stage of where my 7" by 7" book is at. The set of images above is with text of what i think summarised what the TDR vs FEED night was about. I don't think this works...
It looks very interesting. The typography needs more work. I'm not sure it works over the top of the images. Try some layouts that display the type somewhere in the white space. Keep the large format type but also try more subtle layouts as it is a bit shouty. Look at tomato and whynots and make some reference to them in your research as they have obviously been a subconscious influence. I am also aware that this is a Blog but can you make more of an effort to structure your sentences better? Some of the hard work is being undone by the way you are describing it in your writing.
It looks very interesting. The typography needs more work. I'm not sure it works over the top of the images. Try some layouts that display the type somewhere in the white space. Keep the large format type but also try more subtle layouts as it is a bit shouty. Look at tomato and whynots and make some reference to them in your research as they have obviously been a subconscious influence. I am also aware that this is a Blog but can you make more of an effort to structure your sentences better? Some of the hard work is being undone by the way you are describing it in your writing.
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